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My fav character from Baka to Test TwT Her name is Minami Shimada. She beats up Aki A LOT! lolz... Watching AGT at the moment too... can`t stop.... must upload moer devatations..... piers a troll
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um, i like your soft outlines and colors, they seem to suit the style you want to draw. however, there are some issues with the picture that id like to point out, with the intent of helping you improve:
first off, her face is somewhat crooked. from the position of her chin in relation to her neck, it appers she's supposed to be looking straight-forward; however, from the way her eyes and eyebrows are placed (diagonally), she seems to be tilting her head. on the subject of her eyes, they also seem to be a bit too far apart. as a general rule, the face should be five times the width of one of the character's eyes, with about one "eye" space between the two eyes. also, her ears (well, the one that's visible) seems a tad too small.
as for the character's body, the shoulders are slightly uneven and possibly too small. this makes it hard to proportion the rest of the body well, i assume, which is why the character is slimming down into nothingness (or at least grossly undersized waistline, hips and/or legs).
my biggest suggestion would be to make a simple skeleton with guidlines for the head so as to help you know how to position the character's features and pose before the drawing gets too detailed to correct easily. if you'd like, i could do a redline of this picture to help you understand my critiques some more. just send me a note or say so in a reply. I hope my feedback helps and i wish you the best of luck in your future endeavors.